Last Call Review of draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13
review-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13-genart-lc-shirazipour-2017-12-07-00
| Request | Review of | draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 25) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2017-12-04 | |
| Requested | 2017-11-06 | |
| Authors | Kathleen Moriarty , Al Morton | |
| I-D last updated | 2017-12-07 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Telechat review of -09
by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -10 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -13 by Ines Robles (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -13 by Joe Clarke (diff) Genart Last Call review of -13 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef (diff) Genart Telechat review of -15 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 13 (document currently at 25) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2017-12-07 |
review-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13-genart-lc-shirazipour-2017-12-07-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-13 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2017-11-17 IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-04 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 33], Section 6, "inlcudes"---->"includes" -[Page 34], Section 6.2, "soltuions"---->"solutions" -[Page 35], typo "7.1. Effect of Encypted ACKs"--->"7.1. Effect of Encrypted ACKs" -[Page 37], Section 7.3, point 3 is empty. -Please change the few occurrences of "middle box" to "middlebox" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com