Telechat Review of draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-15
review-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-15-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2018-02-08-00
| Request | Review of | draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 25) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2018-02-06 | |
| Requested | 2018-01-19 | |
| Authors | Kathleen Moriarty , Al Morton | |
| I-D last updated | 2018-02-08 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Telechat review of -09
by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -10 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -13 by Ines Robles (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -13 by Joe Clarke (diff) Genart Last Call review of -13 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef (diff) Genart Telechat review of -15 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 15 (document currently at 25) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2018-02-08 |
review-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-15-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2018-02-08-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-15 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2018-01-26 IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-04 IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-08 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC . Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -few occurrences: "pervassive"--->"pervasive" -[Page 6], Sec 1.1, "were were built "---->"were built " -[Page 12] , "scaleability"--->"scalability" x2 -[Page 16] , "unaccessible"--->"inaccessible" -[Page 29] ,"depening"--->"depending", "permited"--->"permitted " -[Page 31], "rasises"---->"raises", "encyption"---->"encryption", "visibilty"--->"visibility" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com