Telechat Review of draft-moonesamy-ietf-conduct-3184bis-05
review-moonesamy-ietf-conduct-3184bis-05-genart-telechat-carpenter-2014-01-03-00

Request Review of draft-moonesamy-ietf-conduct-3184bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-01-07
Requested 2013-12-19
Authors S Moonesamy
I-D last updated 2014-01-03
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Alan DeKok (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Scott O. Bradner (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian E. Carpenter
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-moonesamy-ietf-conduct-3184bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready
Completed 2014-01-03
review-moonesamy-ietf-conduct-3184bis-05-genart-telechat-carpenter-2014-01-03-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For
background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
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http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call
comments you may receive.

Document: draft-moonesamy-ietf-conduct-3184bis-05.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2014-01-03
IETF LC End Date: 2013-12-01 (+ extension)
IESG Telechat date: 2014-01-09

Summary:  Ready
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Comment:
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I made some comments on my personal opinion of the content of
this draft, which contributed to the recent updates. I also have
some sympathy with Russ Housley's recent comments, but the
wordsmithing has to stop somewhere.

Issues:
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>From the Gen-ART point of view, I found no problems in this draft.