Telechat Review of draft-moriarty-pkcs1-03
review-moriarty-pkcs1-03-genart-telechat-yong-2016-11-12-00
Request | Review of | draft-moriarty-pkcs1 |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 03) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2016-09-13 | |
Requested | 2016-09-08 | |
Authors | Kathleen Moriarty , Burt Kaliski , Jakob Jonsson , Andreas Rusch | |
I-D last updated | 2016-11-12 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Telechat review of -03
by Lucy Yong
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Paul Wouters (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Lucy Yong |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-moriarty-pkcs1 by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 03 | |
Result | Ready w/issues | |
Completed | 2016-11-12 |
review-moriarty-pkcs1-03-genart-telechat-yong-2016-11-12-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-moriaty-pkcs1-03 Reviewer: Lucy Yong Review Date: 15 September 2016 IETF LC End Date: 2 September 2016 Summary: The document is well written, and is ready for publication as Informational RFC. IPR considerations are in Appendix D. Major Issues: None Minor Issues: · Several places use xxx-PKCS-v1_5, should it be xxx-PKCS1-v1_5? where xxx may be EMSA, RSAES, and RSASSA. Editorial Issues: · Please check the Idnits tool · Page 18: s/k - 2hLen -2/k - 2hLen - 2/ · Page 18: s/"knowing"the/"knowing" the/ · Page 40: s/ -- such as the salt value in EMSA-PSS --/ such as the salt value in EMSA-PSS/ · replace Section 7.2.2. title with “Decryption operation” · In Section 8.2, s/Note:/Note./ (to be consistent with the rest of doc.) · Section 8.2 last paragraph, replace “recommended” with “RECOMMENDED” Regards, Lucy