Last Call Review of draft-moriarty-pkcs5-v2dot1-01
review-moriarty-pkcs5-v2dot1-01-opsdir-lc-wijnen-2016-08-24-00
| Request | Review of | draft-moriarty-pkcs5-v2dot1 |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2016-09-02 | |
| Requested | 2016-08-08 | |
| Authors | Kathleen Moriarty , Burt Kaliski , Andreas Rusch | |
| I-D last updated | 2016-08-24 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -01
by Liang Xia
(diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Bert Wijnen (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Bert Wijnen |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-moriarty-pkcs5-v2dot1 by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 01 (document currently at 04) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2016-08-24 |
review-moriarty-pkcs5-v2dot1-01-opsdir-lc-wijnen-2016-08-24-00
I did OPSDIR review for this document. Such reviews are primarily intended to check if there is any operational or network management impact. I do not see any such impact/aspects in the document, so I think the doc is ready for publication from this perspective. Some nits/questions: - Section: 5.2. PBKDFs should that be: 5.2. PBKDF2 ??? - I am somewhat surprised to see that ALL references are normative. even a reference to a slide deck: [WANG] X. Wang, A.C. Yao, and F. Yao. Cryptanalysis on SHA-1. Presented by Adi Shamir at the rump session of CRYPTO 2005. Slides may be found currently at < http://csrc.nist.gov/groups/ST/hash/documents/Wang_SHA1-New- Result.pdf> ??? Bert