Telechat Review of draft-murchison-nntp-compress-06
review-murchison-nntp-compress-06-genart-telechat-dupont-2016-10-31-00

Request Review of draft-murchison-nntp-compress
Requested rev. no specific revision
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-11-01
Requested 2016-10-17
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Barry Leiba (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Francis Dupont
Review review-murchison-nntp-compress-06-genart-telechat-dupont-2016-10-31
Posted at https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg13724.html
Reviewed rev. 06
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2016-10-31
Review completed: 2016-10-31

Review
review-murchison-nntp-compress-06-genart-telechat-dupont-2016-10-31

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Document: draft-murchison-nntp-compress-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20160922
IETF LC End Date: 20161010
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - ToC page 2 and A page 21: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 2.2.1 page 5: e.g. -> e.g.,

 - 3 page 11: e.g, -> e.g.,

 - 7.1.1 page 15: I strongly suggest to not name the algorithm X,
  i.e., Subject: Registration of NNTP compression algorithm X -> Z

 - 7.1.2 page 16: if you can do that (or ask the RFC Editor):
  insert a line break before "(<ietf-" in place than between
  this and "nntp@...".

 - Authors' Addresses: I suggest to change US into USA. BTW if you
  prefer ISO IS 3166 2 letter codes you should change France into FR

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr

PS: about the not ASCII characters in Authors' Addresses, you can (should)
ask the RFC Editor for guidelines (I know things are changing about
this point but not what will be implemented before the publication
of this document...)