Last Call Review of draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016-01
review-pal-eidr-urn-2016-01-opsdir-lc-ersue-2016-06-29-00

Request Review of draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-07-01
Requested 2016-06-13
Authors Pierre-Anthony Lemieux
I-D last updated 2016-06-29
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -01 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Taylor Yu (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Mehmet Ersue (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Mehmet Ersue
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016 by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 01 (document currently at 03)
Result Ready
Completed 2016-06-29
review-pal-eidr-urn-2016-01-opsdir-lc-ersue-2016-06-29-00

I reviewed the document "Entertainment Identifier Registry (EIDR) URN Namespace
Definition" (draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016-01.txt) as part of the Operational
directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by
the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
operational area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.



Intended status: Informational

Obsoletes: 7302 (if approved)

Current IESG state: In Last Call (ends 2016-07-01)

IANA OK - Actions Needed



Summary: The document obsoletes RFC7302, which is on Entertainment Identifier
Registry (EIDR) Identifiers used for the globally unique identification of
motion picture and television content. The document defines the formal Uniform
Resource Name (URN) Namespace Identifier (NID) for EIDR Identifiers. The
changes compared to RFC7302 are described in Annex A.2.



I don’t see any issue from operations and management pov.

However, following nit should be addressed:



  -- Looks like a reference, but probably isn't: '1' on line 375

=> There is indeed no reference defined as [1].



Mehmet