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Last Call Review of draft-pti-pen-registration-08
review-pti-pen-registration-08-artart-lc-leiba-2022-11-08-00

Request Review of draft-pti-pen-registration
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2022-12-04
Requested 2022-11-06
Authors Amanda Baber , Paul E. Hoffman
I-D last updated 2022-11-08
Completed reviews Artart Last Call review of -08 by Barry Leiba (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -09 by Barry Leiba (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Barry Leiba
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-pti-pen-registration by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/40R8NfBgPputBJJMHt_geD5F8nY
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2022-11-08
review-pti-pen-registration-08-artart-lc-leiba-2022-11-08-00
Clear and clean, thanks.  I have just the nittiest nit and one question:

The nit: “Diameter” is not an acronym and shouldn’t be in ALL CAPS. (Section
1.1 and Section 3)

The question: Section 2.1 says, “The contact's name and email address will be
included in the public registry.”

Hadn’t we decided not to post email addresses in the registries going forward,
for privacy reasons?  I thought that IANA would record but not post the contact
details, and would make the connection upon request.  But maybe I misremember
or misunderstood.