Last Call Review of draft-rsalz-2028bis-05
review-rsalz-2028bis-05-rtgdir-lc-vainshtein-2022-02-28-00

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Document: draft-rsalz-2028bis-05
Reviewer: Alexander (|”Sasha”) Vainshtein
Review Date: 28-Feb-22
IETF LC End Date: 07-Mar-22
Intended Status: Nest Current Practice

Summary:

I have some minor concerns about this document that I think should be resolved
before publication. Comments: The draft describes entities involved in the IETF
standards process. It is easy to read. To the best of my understanding its
purpose is alignment with the current structure of the Internet Society and its
affiliated organizations (IETF, IANA, RFC Production center (nee RFC Editor)
etc.  The previous document describing these entities has been published as RFC
2028 in 1996. The author of the draft and I have exchanged a few emails
regarding my concerns. We did not reach the agreement, but in any case I would
like to than the author for responsiveness and cooperation.

Major Issues: None found

Minor Issues:

These days it is quite common in the IETF process to differentiate between
document Authors and Contributors, especially when  many persons have been
actively involved with development of the technical aspects of the document. 
The number of Authors is usually limited to no more than 5, and their names
appear on the title page of the document, while Contributors (if any) are only
listed in a dedicated section within the document. At the same time the
Contributors have a well-defined role in the process, e.g. they must report
about any non-disclosed IPR related to the document (or lack of any such IPR)
both during adoption of the document as a WG document and also during the WG
Last Call.

The draft mentioned Editors and Authors of the document (and explains that
these terms are interchangeable), but it does not mention Contributors at all.

I have raised this issue with the author of the draft, and IMHO we have “agreed
to disagree” on this point.

Regards,
Sasha

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Regards,
Sasha

Office: +972-39266302
Cell:      +972-549266302
Email:   Alexander.Vainshtein@rbbn.com

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