Telechat Review of draft-salter-rfc5430bis-
review-salter-rfc5430bis-genart-telechat-dupont-2011-11-01-00
| Request | Review of | draft-salter-rfc5430bis |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 01) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2011-11-01 | |
| Requested | 2011-11-01 | |
| Authors | Margaret Salter , Russ Housley | |
| Draft last updated | 2011-11-01 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Telechat review of -??
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Francis Dupont
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-salter-rfc5430bis-genart-telechat-dupont-2011-11-01
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| Completed | 2011-11-01 |
review-salter-rfc5430bis-genart-telechat-dupont-2011-11-01-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-salter-rfc5430bis-01.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20111022 IETF LC End Date: 20111031 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Status page 1: This Internet-Draft will expire on 2 April 2011. -> 2012 (don't fix the draft but the tool which gives this wrong date :-) - Toc page 2 and 6 page 9: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 4 page 7: ClientHellomessage -> ClientHello message - 9 page 12: extra white line in: A Transitional Suite B TLS system configured at a minimum level of security of 128 bits, MUST offer the TLS_ECDHE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_128_CBC_SHA cipher suite and/or the TLS_ECDHE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_256_CBC_SHA cipher suite in the ClientHello message. The TLS_ECDHE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_128_CBC_SHA cipher suite is preferred, and if it is offered, it MUST appear before the TLS_ECDHE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_256_CBC_SHA cipher suite (if present). - 9 page 13 (twice, last occurrences): TLS_ECHDE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_256_CBC_SHA -> TLS_ECDHE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_256_CBC_SHA Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr