Last Call Review of draft-schaad-cbor-content-01
review-schaad-cbor-content-01-opsdir-lc-banks-2019-10-31-00

Request Review of draft-schaad-cbor-content
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 02)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2019-11-22
Requested 2019-10-25
Authors Jim Schaad
Draft last updated 2019-10-31
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -01 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sarah Banks
State Completed
Review review-schaad-cbor-content-01-opsdir-lc-banks-2019-10-31
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/rWqxKkDRpLCbImKWhvpCCLBmWnY
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 02)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-10-31

Review
review-schaad-cbor-content-01-opsdir-lc-banks-2019-10-31

Reviewer: Sarah Banks
Status: Ready

This draft describes defines a set of content types for CMS that hold CBOR content. The abstract text requires you to know what the document is already about, but the Introduction section closes this loop and is well written. The draft is ready to go, but I have one small editorial comment. In Section 5 (IANA Considerations), the first table there has a references column, and the text currently says "[[This Document", and should probably be changed to "[[This Document]]", to match the rest of the draft.

Thanks
Sarah