Last Call Review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02

Request Review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-10-23
Requested 2017-10-09
Authors Jim Schaad, Rick Andrews
Draft last updated 2017-10-16
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -02 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even 
State Completed
Review review-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02-genart-lc-even-2017-10-16
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 03)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2017-10-16


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Document: draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-10-16
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-23
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document is ready for publication with nits as an Informational RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 

1. Add a sentence to the RFC editor to remove the "Contributing to this document " section
2. The document is missing a table of content
3. In the acknowledgment section the sentence "This document stole  text heavily from a previous document doing
   similar thing by Russ Housely" is not clear, do you hint that Russ also stole?  I think better wording "This document uses a lot of text from a similar document  by Russ Housely"