Last Call Review of draft-schaad-pkix-rfc2875-bis-03
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Reviewer: Martin Thomson
Review Date: 2012-12-06
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Summary: Looks good to me. Ship it.
Section 3 does not establish a notation convention for multiplication.
I didn't find a specific place that this was a problem, but it seemed
appropriate since multiplications was, in some places denoted 'n*b'
and others as 'xy', even though multi-character identifiers are used
in many places. This does imply that a precedence override is
necessary. I suggest parentheses, since they are already used
Section 3: s/MAC funtion/MAC functions/
Section 5: could use a more rigorous list construction, the
definitions all run together
Needs more ASN.1