Last Call Review of draft-sin-sdnrg-sdn-approach-04

Request Review of draft-sin-sdnrg-sdn-approach
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2013-11-04
Requested 2013-10-10
Authors Mohamed Boucadair, Christian Jacquenet
Draft last updated 2013-11-05
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Leif Johansson (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -05 by David Kessens (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Leif Johansson 
State Completed
Review review-sin-sdnrg-sdn-approach-04-secdir-lc-johansson-2013-11-05
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 09)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2013-11-05



I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the 
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the 
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat 
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This is an informational overview of SDN providing an operational and
service-provider perspective. 

My only comment is that the Security considerations section reads: "This 
document does not define any protocol nor architecture" and is otherwise
blank, however there is a perfectly good section "On Security" just above
it that could easily qualify as a security considerations section. My 
suggestion would be to rename "On Security" to "Security Considerations".

	Cheers Leif