Last Call Review of draft-sparks-genarea-mailarch-
review-sparks-genarea-mailarch-genart-lc-dupont-2012-08-13-00

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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-08-13
Requested 2012-07-19
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Reviewer Francis Dupont
Review review-sparks-genarea-mailarch-genart-lc-dupont-2012-08-13
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg07674.html
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2012-08-13
Review completed: 2012-08-13

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review-sparks-genarea-mailarch-genart-lc-dupont-2012-08-13

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Document: draft-sparks-genarea-mailarch-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20120810
IETF LC End Date: 20120813
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues:
 - a very minor question: why in the search syntax is there no "NOT" operator,
  only "AND" and "OR"?
 - annoying edition bug in 2.6

Nits/editorial comments:
 - ToC page 2 and 6 page 7: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 1 page 3 and 2.1 page 4: capabilites -> capabilities

 - 2.1 page 4: occuring -> occurring

 - 2.6 page 7: please remove the last item, i.e.:

   o  The system must allow the administrator to delete messages from an
      archived list

  which is already specified by the previous one, i.e.:

   o  The system must allow the administrator to add messages to and
      delete messages from an archived list.  The system should log such
      actions.

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr