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review-sparks-genarea-review-tracker-02-genart-lc-krishnan-2015-08-04-00

Request Review of draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-08-04
Requested 2015-07-09
Authors Robert Sparks , Tero Kivinen
I-D last updated 2015-08-04
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Suresh Krishnan
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Steve Hanna (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 02 (document currently at 03)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2015-08-04
review-sparks-genarea-review-tracker-02-genart-lc-krishnan-2015-08-04-00
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Document: draft-sparks-genarea-review-tracker-03.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2015/09/01
IESG Telechat date: 2015/09/03

Summary: The draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC but 
I do have some comments you may wish to address.

* Section 2

Not sure what the "draft's primary email alias" refers to. Is this the 
draft-foo at ietf.org or draft-foo.all at ietf.org? In either case it may make 
sense to clarify.

* Section 3.3

"A reviewer must be able to configure the tool to remind them when 
actions are due."

It would be nice if the tool would allow the reviewer to set an 
individually customizable lead time here. e.g. Remind 2 days before the 
LC is due or 3 days before the Telechat.

* Not sure if this should be in Section 3.2 or 3.3 but it would be nice 
of the deadlines for review would automatically be changed when the 
document is rescheduled to another telechat and the secretary and 
reviewer are simply notified.

* Section 3.4

Shouldn't it be possible for the review requester (e.g. an AD) to set an 
earlier deadline manually for one or more reviews (e.g. due to 
travel/vacation)?

Thanks
Suresh