Telechat Review of draft-sprecher-mpls-tp-oam-considerations-
review-sprecher-mpls-tp-oam-considerations-genart-telechat-carpenter-2012-05-13-00
| Request | Review of | draft-sprecher-mpls-tp-oam-considerations |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 03) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2012-05-08 | |
| Requested | 2012-05-01 | |
| Authors | Nurit Sprecher , Kyung-Yeop Hong | |
| Draft last updated | 2012-05-13 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Telechat review of -??
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Brian E. Carpenter
Tsvdir Last Call review of -?? by Martin Stiemerling |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Brian E. Carpenter |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-sprecher-mpls-tp-oam-considerations-genart-telechat-carpenter-2012-05-13
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| Completed | 2012-05-13 |
review-sprecher-mpls-tp-oam-considerations-genart-telechat-carpenter-2012-05-13-00
Please see attached review. I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-sprecher-mpls-tp-oam-considerations-03.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2012-05-04 IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-24 IESG Telechat date: 2012-05-10 Summary: Ready -------- Comments: --------- My Last Call comments have been addressed, and the document now reads more logically, due to material being moved to the appendices. Nit: ---- There is duplicated text in section 1.2: be managed using tools with similar look and feel. The requirements specifications [RFC5654] and [RFC5860] specifications [RFC5654] and [RFC5860] capture the essential issues that must be resolved to allow