Telechat Review of draft-sprecher-mpls-tp-oam-considerations-
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Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2012-05-04
IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-24
IESG Telechat date: 2012-05-10
My Last Call comments have been addressed, and the document now reads
more logically, due to material being moved to the appendices.
There is duplicated text in section 1.2:
be managed using tools with similar look and feel. The requirements
specifications [RFC5654] and [RFC5860] specifications [RFC5654] and
[RFC5860] capture the essential issues that must be resolved to allow