Telechat Review of draft-worley-service-example-14
review-worley-service-example-14-genart-telechat-krishnan-2013-10-23-00

Request Review of draft-worley-service-example
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-10-08
Requested 2013-09-19
Draft last updated 2013-10-23
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -13 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -14 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Stephen Kent (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan
State Completed
Review review-worley-service-example-14-genart-telechat-krishnan-2013-10-23
Reviewed rev. 14 (document currently at 15)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2013-10-23

Review
review-worley-service-example-14-genart-telechat-krishnan-2013-10-23

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see


http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html

).

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before
posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-worley-service-example-13.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2013/10/08
IESG Telechat date: 2013/10/10

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC but
I do have a few comments that the authors may wish to consider.

Minor
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* Please add an IANA considerations section to the draft stating that
the draft requires no IANA actions.

Enhancement request
===================

* Maybe it is too much to ask, but it would be great if the mailing list
references contained an URL to the archive as it is easier to get the
right mail. I leave it upto your discretion if you want to do this or not.

e.g.

For
   [kyzivat-2]
              Kyzivat, P., "[Sip-implementors] draft-worley-service-
              example-02", sip-implementors mailing list 020426,
              September 2008.


add



https://lists.cs.columbia.edu/pipermail/sip-implementors/2008-September/020426.html