Telechat Review of draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-09
review-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-09-secdir-telechat-shekh-yusef-2017-11-27-00

Request Review of draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2017-11-28
Requested 2017-11-27
Other Reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -07 by Lou Berger (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Carlos Martinez (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Jari Arkko (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
Review review-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-09-secdir-telechat-shekh-yusef-2017-11-27
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/jDzvq6lWnAWnaDjs_1IsmHocRLI
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2017-11-27
Review completed: 2017-11-27

Review
review-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-09-secdir-telechat-shekh-yusef-2017-11-27

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

The document defines a YANG data model that defines service configuration
elements that can be used in communication protocols between customers
and network operators. Those elements can also be used as input to
automated control and configuration applications.

The authors addressed my comments on version -05 of the document.
I have not further comments on this version of the draft.

Regards.
 Rifaat