Last Call Review of draft-yee-ssh-iana-requirements-01
review-yee-ssh-iana-requirements-01-secdir-lc-santesson-2022-10-17-00
| Request | Review of | draft-yee-ssh-iana-requirements |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 03) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
| Deadline | 2022-10-28 | |
| Requested | 2022-09-30 | |
| Authors | Peter E. Yee | |
| I-D last updated | 2024-01-24 (Latest revision 2023-09-08) | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart IETF Last Call review of -01
by Stewart Bryant
(diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -01 by Stefan Santesson (diff) Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -01 by Scott Rose (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Stefan Santesson |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-yee-ssh-iana-requirements by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/QjNstv-IklmPC8ykaYicE4vLlUM | |
| Reviewed revision | 01 (document currently at 03) | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2022-10-17 |
review-yee-ssh-iana-requirements-01-secdir-lc-santesson-2022-10-17-00
This draft is reasonable and OK in all material aspects. The document has no security considerations and that is well motivated for this document. I just have a few general comments and nits: 1) Section 2 first paragraph. I think the sentence is missing an "is" word. Assuming that the sentence intended to say: "... whose registration policy is changed from IETF Review to Expert Review." 2) I'm not convinced that it is suitable and particularly useful to include a mail discussion as a reference to a standards document. At least in this case when the discussion seems to be in agreement at large with the initial statement by Sean Turner. Even though this was interesting reading for me, I think a summary of the strongest arguments would serve the document better than a link to the actual discussion. In fact, the initial argument by Sean seems to say most of what is relevant.