Last Call Review of draft-yourtchenko-cisco-ies-09
review-yourtchenko-cisco-ies-09-genart-lc-moriarty-2014-01-31-00

Request Review of draft-yourtchenko-cisco-ies
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-02-18
Requested 2014-01-23
Authors Andrew Yourtchenko, Paul Aitken, Benoît Claise
Draft last updated 2014-01-31
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Kathleen Moriarty (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Kathleen Moriarty
State Completed
Review review-yourtchenko-cisco-ies-09-genart-lc-moriarty-2014-01-31
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2014-01-31

Review
review-yourtchenko-cisco-ies-09-genart-lc-moriarty-2014-01-31

Document: draft-yourtchenko-cisco-ies-09

Reviewer: Kathleen Moriarty

Review Date: 1/31/14

IETF LC End Date:

IESG Telechat date: (if known) 2/18/14

 

Summary:  This draft extends 

RFC3954, but is specific to Cisco.  There has already been discussion about this being a Cisco specific draft and involved consultation with the WG chair.

 

For Gen-art, the document has a few editorial nits that should be resolved and other reviewers points on the Cisco specific document should be considered.  Otherwise, the document is ready for publication.

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

Nits/editorial comments:

Introduction:  The third sentence is terminated with a question mark and it should be a period as it is not a question in itself.  The last sentence in this paragraph correctly terminates with a question mark, but the space before it should be deleted.