Last Call Review of draft-yourtchenko-cisco-ies-09
review-yourtchenko-cisco-ies-09-secdir-lc-kaufman-2014-01-30-00

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
 Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

This document is a mechanism to bring an IANA registry of log event types up to
date to correspond with existing practice based on updates to the protocol
defined in RFC3954. There are no security considerations other than vague
concerns over what a buggy existing implementations might do if they see new
event types that they don't recognize. This should not be controversial.

Formatting nits:

At the bottom of page 2 and the top of page 3, there are question marks that
seem to have a pre-pended space that looks out of place, but it may have been
required by some formatting requirement around the bracketed reference that
precedes it.

The formatter that translated the XML in appendix A into text for the RFC seems
to have strange taste in where to place line breaks. For example, in the middle
of page 13, there appears:

<reference>

http://www

 .cisco.com
 /en/US/pro
 ducts/hw/s
 witches/ps
 700/products_configuration_example...

        --Charlie