Telechat Review of draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06
review-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06-genart-telechat-campbell-2013-12-19-00

Request Review of draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-10-08
Requested 2013-09-30
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Ben Campbell
Review review-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06-genart-telechat-campbell-2013-12-19
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg09126.html
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2013-12-19
Review completed: 2013-12-19

Review
review-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06-genart-telechat-campbell-2013-12-19

Thanks Ben.  We'll fix these nits in the next version.

Mary.

On Tue, Oct 8, 2013 at 3:39 PM, Ben Campbell 

<

ben at nostrum.com

>

 wrote:




I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on


Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at


< 

http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.





Please wait for direction from your document shepherd


or AD before posting a new version of the draft.





Document: draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06


Reviewer: Ben Campbell


Review Date: 2013-10-08


IESG Telechat date: 2013-10-10





Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. This version addresses all the comments from my last call review of version 04. I do have a couple of new (or I missed the first time) editorial comments that might be worth addressing if there is a new version prior to approval.





Major issues:





None





Minor issues:





None





Nits/editorial comments:





-- General:





idnits 2.12.18 reports some missing references--please check.





-- Abstract and Intro





Please expand UA and XCON on first mention (Both in Abstract and in Section 1).