Telechat Review of draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06
Thanks Ben. We'll fix these nits in the next version.
On Tue, Oct 8, 2013 at 3:39 PM, Ben Campbell
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Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2013-10-08
IESG Telechat date: 2013-10-10
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. This version addresses all the comments from my last call review of version 04. I do have a couple of new (or I missed the first time) editorial comments that might be worth addressing if there is a new version prior to approval.
idnits 2.12.18 reports some missing references--please check.
-- Abstract and Intro
Please expand UA and XCON on first mention (Both in Abstract and in Section 1).