Telechat Review of draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06
review-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06-genart-telechat-campbell-2013-12-19-00

Request Review of draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-10-08
Requested 2013-09-30
Authors Rifaat Shekh-Yusef , Mary Barnes
I-D last updated 2013-12-19
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ben Campbell
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2013-12-19
review-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06-genart-telechat-campbell-2013-12-19-00
Thanks Ben.  We'll fix these nits in the next version.

Mary.

On Tue, Oct 8, 2013 at 3:39 PM, Ben Campbell

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Please wait for direction from your document shepherd

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Document: draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06

Reviewer: Ben Campbell

Review Date: 2013-10-08

IESG Telechat date: 2013-10-10

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. This
version addresses all the comments from my last call review of version 04. I do
have a couple of new (or I missed the first time) editorial comments that might
be worth addressing if there is a new version prior to approval.

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

-- General:

idnits 2.12.18 reports some missing references--please check.

-- Abstract and Intro

Please expand UA and XCON on first mention (Both in Abstract and in Section 1).