Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) Label-Controlled Asynchronous Transfer Mode (ATM) and Frame-Relay Management Interface Definition
RFC 4368
Yes
No Objection
Note: This ballot was opened for revision 08 and is now closed.
(Alex Zinin; former steering group member) Yes
(Allison Mankin; former steering group member) No Objection
(Bert Wijnen; former steering group member) No Objection
From Bert Wijnen:
When I se this entry in a Table:
MplsLcAtmStdInterfaceConfEntry ::= SEQUENCE {
mplsLcAtmStdCtrlVpi AtmVpIdentifier,
mplsLcAtmStdCtrlVci MplsAtmVcIdentifier,
mplsLcAtmStdUnlabTrafVpi AtmVpIdentifier,
mplsLcAtmStdUnlabTrafVci MplsAtmVcIdentifier,
mplsLcAtmStdVcMerge TruthValue,
mplsLcAtmVcDirectlyConnected TruthValue,
mplsLcAtmLcAtmVPI AtmVpIdentifier,
mplsLcAtmStdIfConfRowStatus RowStatus,
mplsLcAtmStdIfConfStorageType StorageType
}
Then I recommend (for naming consistency) to rename
mplsLcAtmVcDirectlyConnected TruthValue,
mplsLcAtmLcAtmVPI AtmVpIdentifier,
to
mplsLcAtmStdVcDirectlyConnected TruthValue,
mplsLcAtmStdLcAtmVPI AtmVpIdentifier,
In the security considerations, you write:
o the MplsLcAtmStdInterfaceConfTable and
mplsLcFrStdInterfaceConfTable collectively
but the actual tables in the MIB module are named:
mplsLcAtmStdInterfaceConfTable
mplsLcFrStdInterfaceConfTable
So the first table name is incorrect (capital M which should
be lowercase). It occurs again later in the section
I know... this is REALLY a NIT, but once the doc has become an
RFC, you cannot fix it anymore.
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From AAA_doctor Jari:
I reviewed this draft. It looks OK, but I'll admit that I know
very little about MPLS. Some nits were found, however:
> is capabile of ATM VC merge, otherwise it MUST
s/capabile/capable/
> MPLS-related configuration and/or performanc statistics.
s/performanc/performance/
> LSR is willing to accept unlabled traffic
s/unlabled/unlabeled/
> where possible. Specifically,SNMPv3 VACM and USM MUST be
s/,/, /
(Bill Fenner; former steering group member) No Objection
(Brian Carpenter; former steering group member) (was Discuss) No Objection
(David Kessens; former steering group member) No Objection
(Jon Peterson; former steering group member) No Objection
(Margaret Cullen; former steering group member) No Objection
(Mark Townsley; former steering group member) No Objection
(Russ Housley; former steering group member) No Objection
(Sam Hartman; former steering group member) No Objection
(Scott Hollenbeck; former steering group member) No Objection
(Ted Hardie; former steering group member) No Objection