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Multiprotocol Label Switching (MPLS) Label-Controlled Asynchronous Transfer Mode (ATM) and Frame-Relay Management Interface Definition
RFC 4368

Yes

(Alex Zinin)

No Objection

(Allison Mankin)
(Bill Fenner)
(Brian Carpenter)
(David Kessens)
(Jon Peterson)
(Margaret Cullen)
(Mark Townsley)
(Russ Housley)
(Sam Hartman)
(Scott Hollenbeck)
(Ted Hardie)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 08 and is now closed.

(Alex Zinin; former steering group member) Yes

Yes ()

                            

(Allison Mankin; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Bert Wijnen; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (2005-09-12)
From Bert Wijnen:

When I se this entry in a Table:
  MplsLcAtmStdInterfaceConfEntry ::= SEQUENCE {
   mplsLcAtmStdCtrlVpi                 AtmVpIdentifier,
   mplsLcAtmStdCtrlVci                 MplsAtmVcIdentifier,
   mplsLcAtmStdUnlabTrafVpi            AtmVpIdentifier,
   mplsLcAtmStdUnlabTrafVci            MplsAtmVcIdentifier,
   mplsLcAtmStdVcMerge                 TruthValue,
   mplsLcAtmVcDirectlyConnected        TruthValue,
   mplsLcAtmLcAtmVPI                   AtmVpIdentifier,
   mplsLcAtmStdIfConfRowStatus         RowStatus,
   mplsLcAtmStdIfConfStorageType       StorageType
  }

Then I recommend (for naming consistency) to rename
   mplsLcAtmVcDirectlyConnected        TruthValue,
   mplsLcAtmLcAtmVPI                   AtmVpIdentifier,
to
   mplsLcAtmStdVcDirectlyConnected     TruthValue,
   mplsLcAtmStdLcAtmVPI                AtmVpIdentifier,

In the security considerations, you write:
    o    the MplsLcAtmStdInterfaceConfTable and
         mplsLcFrStdInterfaceConfTable collectively
but the actual tables in the MIB module are named:
   mplsLcAtmStdInterfaceConfTable
   mplsLcFrStdInterfaceConfTable
So the first table name is incorrect (capital M which should
be lowercase). It occurs again later in the section
I know... this is REALLY a NIT, but once the doc has become an
RFC, you cannot fix it anymore.

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From AAA_doctor Jari:
I reviewed this draft. It looks OK, but I'll admit that I know
very little about MPLS. Some nits were found, however:

>         is capabile of ATM VC merge, otherwise it MUST

s/capabile/capable/

>         MPLS-related configuration and/or performanc statistics. 

s/performanc/performance/

>         LSR is willing to accept unlabled traffic

s/unlabled/unlabeled/

>         where possible.  Specifically,SNMPv3 VACM and USM MUST be 

s/,/, /

(Bill Fenner; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Brian Carpenter; former steering group member) (was Discuss) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(David Kessens; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Jon Peterson; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Margaret Cullen; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Mark Townsley; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Russ Housley; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Sam Hartman; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Scott Hollenbeck; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Ted Hardie; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()