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Subcodes for BGP Cease Notification Message
RFC 4486

Yes

(Bill Fenner)

No Objection

(Alex Zinin)
(Allison Mankin)
(Bert Wijnen)
(David Kessens)
(Jon Peterson)
(Margaret Cullen)
(Mark Townsley)
(Russ Housley)
(Sam Hartman)
(Ted Hardie)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 07 and is now closed.

(Bill Fenner; former steering group member) Yes

Yes ()

                            

(Alex Zinin; former steering group member) (was Discuss) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Allison Mankin; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Bert Wijnen; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Brian Carpenter; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (2006-02-15)
There is no Category field in the header of the document

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Document: draft-ietf-idr-cease-subcode-05.txt 
From: Lakshminath Dondeti 
Date: 13 april 2005 

+++++++++++++++++
Review of 'Subcodes for BGP Cease Notification Message '
  <draft-ietf-idr-cease-subcode-05.txt> as a Proposed Standard

IETF LC ends 2005-04-08.

1.  Section 1 uses the old RFC2026 template and MUST be updated.
2. Editorial:  replace co-relating with correlating
3. Section 5:  In the text corresponding to Subcode 8, please replace 
Resource with Resources
4. There is only one figure, but I still suggest numbering it and 
putting a label on it.  Also, please make sure that the Figure does not 
span across two pages.
5. Replace "If a BGP speaker runs out of resource" with "If a BGP 
speaker runs out of resources"
6. There is no IPR statement.
7. There is also no indication of "track".  I presume the I-D is in 
standards track, and is in the proposed standard stage.

In summary, except for the templates etc., I have only minor editorial 
suggestions for improvement.
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(David Kessens; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Jon Peterson; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Margaret Cullen; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Mark Townsley; former steering group member) (was Discuss) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Russ Housley; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Sam Hartman; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Scott Hollenbeck; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (2005-04-20)
References should be split normative/informative.

(Ted Hardie; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()