Internet Small Computer System Interface (iSCSI) Extensions for Remote Direct Memory Access (RDMA)
RFC 5046

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 06 and is now closed.

(Lars Eggert) Yes

(Jari Arkko) No Objection

(Ross Callon) No Objection

(Brian Carpenter) No Objection

Comment (2007-01-22)
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draft-ietf-ips-iser-06.txt

(from Gen-ART review by Joel Halpern)

Nit: After the first occurrence of "RDMA-Capable Protocol" in the abstract, could you just put "(RCaP)"

Nit: I would include all the acronyms referenced in the definitions (SN, RCaP, ...) into the Acronym list.

Nit: I may have missed it, but I did not find a definitions (or description) of target and initiator before 2.4.  I presume that this is well-defined in other RDMA specs.  A paragraph here (or actual definitions in section 1) would be helpful.  (Yes, this can be understood once one gets to 2.5.  It is a matter of avoiding usage before description problems.)

(Bill Fenner) No Objection

(Ted Hardie) No Objection

Comment (2007-01-22)
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draft-ietf-ips-iwarp-da-05.txt says:

5.5  Transport Connection 

        The term "Transport Connection" is used in this document as a 
        generic term to represent the end-to-end logical connection 
        as defined by the underlying reliable transport protocol.  
        For this revision of this document, a Transport Connection 
        means only a TCP connection. 

I think the second sentence may be confusing when this reaches RFC status,
since those are not versioned.  I suggest replacing it with something like:

"For this document, all instances of Transport Connection refer to a TCP connection".

(Sam Hartman) No Objection

Comment (2007-01-21)
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This is an excellent example of a concept that the IESG has been
discussing lately: how to separate a framework/architecture document
from a protocol specification to avoid normative references to
informational docs.  This was done well in this instance.

I could not find a use of the VERBS reference in the iser doc.  I was
trying to figure out if that reference was informational, but couldn't
find the citation.

(Russ Housley) No Objection

(Cullen Jennings) No Objection

(David Kessens) No Objection

(Jon Peterson) No Objection

(Dan Romascanu) No Objection

Magnus Westerlund No Objection