Network Mobility Route Optimization Requirements for Operational Use in Aeronautics and Space Exploration Mobile Networks
RFC 5522
Yes
No Objection
Abstain
No Record
Note: This ballot was opened for revision 04 and is now closed.
Lars Eggert No Objection
(Jari Arkko; former steering group member) Yes
(Adrian Farrel; former steering group member) No Objection
I found this to be a particularly well-written document. I wish half the requirements documents I read were half as good.
(Pasi Eronen; former steering group member) No Objection
(Ralph Droms; former steering group member) No Objection
(Robert Sparks; former steering group member) No Objection
(Ron Bonica; former steering group member) No Objection
(Russ Housley; former steering group member) No Objection
Please consider the comments in the Gen-ART Review by Vijay Gurbani
posted on 20-Aug-2009:
1) What is the "Gatelink system"? There are at least two
instances of it in the draft. Any reference or a short
sentence describing this would help the reader not
verbose in this particular domain.
2) Missing closing bracket ')' in Section 2.1.1, third paragraph,
third line; i.e., should be "... in Appendix A.)"
(Tim Polk; former steering group member) No Objection
(Cullen Jennings; former steering group member) Abstain
I don't believe these requirements adequately cover the requirements for ATS data. For example, "Req3 - Latency" is a solution to mitigate latency, not an actual requirement that bounds latency.
(Lisa Dusseault; former steering group member) (was No Objection) No Record