Softwire Hub and Spoke Deployment Framework with Layer Two Tunneling Protocol Version 2 (L2TPv2)
RFC 5571

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 13 and is now closed.

Lars Eggert No Objection

Very clear document. Two minor comments:

Section 1., paragraph 1:
>    The Softwires Working Group has selected Layer Two Tunneling Protocol
>    version 2 (L2TPv2) as the phase 1 protocol to be deployed in the
>    Softwire "Hubs and Spokes" solution space.  This document describes
>    the framework for the L2TPv2 "Hubs and Spokes" solution, and the
>    implementation details specified in this document should be followed
>    to achieve interoperability among different vendor implementations.

  Referring to WGs and their decision process in RFCs isn't terribly
  useful, because WGs are ephemeral. I'd suggest to rephrase this to
  talk about the technology itself.


Section 4., paragraph 0:
> 4.  Standardization Status
>
>    This section groups various Internet standards documents and other
>    publications used in Softwires.

  I don't understand the purpose of this section. Is this supposed to be
  a reading list of related work, provided for the convenience of
  implementors? If so, the section title is confusing.

(Mark Townsley; former steering group member) Yes

(Ralph Droms; former steering group member) Yes

(Chris Newman; former steering group member) No Objection

(Cullen Jennings; former steering group member) No Objection

(Dan Romascanu; former steering group member) (was Discuss) No Objection

(Jari Arkko; former steering group member) No Objection

> If Framed-IPv6-Prefix is not present but Framed-IPv6-Pool is, the SC
> must choose a prefix with that pool to send RAs.

from that pool?

(Jon Peterson; former steering group member) No Objection

(Magnus Westerlund; former steering group member) No Objection

(Pasi Eronen; former steering group member) (was Discuss) No Objection

(Ron Bonica; former steering group member) No Objection

(Ross Callon; former steering group member) No Objection

(Russ Housley; former steering group member) (was Discuss) No Objection

(Tim Polk; former steering group member) (was No Record, Discuss) No Objection

(David Ward; former steering group member) Recuse