Generic Security Service API Version 2: Java Bindings Update
Note: This ballot was opened for revision 05 and is now closed.
(Tim Polk) Yes
(Jari Arkko) No Objection
(Ron Bonica) No Objection
(Ross Callon) No Objection
(Ralph Droms) No Objection
(Lisa Dusseault) No Objection
(Lars Eggert) (was Discuss) No Objection
(Adrian Farrel) (was Discuss) No Objection
(Russ Housley) No Objection
Please consider the places where "service@host" is used in examples. It would be better to use the domain names in RFC 2606 in examples. The Gen-ART Review by Gonzalo Camarillo on 2-Jun-2009 included a few comments that shoule be considered: In general, Abstracts should not contain references. While referencing RFC 2853 to explain that this document obsoletes it is probably OK, I would remove the rest of the references from the Abstract. The naming of the references is not consistent. Some of them are named [RFCxxxx] but not all of them. In Section 4, a ':' to introduce the definition of each optional service would probably make the text clearer (e.g., Mutual Authentication: in addition...) The word "Section" should be capitalized when referring to a specific section (e.g., in Section 8). The ID nits tool makes a few observations about boilerplates. The authors should make sure that the boilerplates in the draft are okay.