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Lars Eggert Yes

(Jari Arkko) (was Discuss) No Objection

> use of IPSEC

correct capitalization is IPsec

> The server computes the capability key using
> its own view of the systemid associated with the respective deviceid
> present in the credential.  If the client's view of the deviceid
> mapping is stale, the client will use the wrong systemid (which must
> be system-wide unique) and the I/O request to the OSD will fail to
> pass the integrity check verification.
> 
> To recover from this condition the client should report the error and
> return the layout using LAYOUTRETURN, and invalidate all the device
> address mappings associated with this layout.  The client can then
> ask for a new layout if it wishes using LAYOUTGET

Is it really the client that should report the error, not the server?

> ///    uint64_t                oda_lun;

The concept "lun" is mentioned only twice in the document, and never
explained. Please explain.

> SHOULD provide a zero-length oti_scsi_device_id<> opaque value Note

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> P+Q encoding scheme [  Internet-Draft pnfs objects June 2008 Codes, Part I"'>17].  In this layout, the last two component

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> The most common source of these errors is media errors, but other
> internal errors might cause this.

"... cause this as well" might be better.

(Ron Bonica) No Objection

(Ross Callon) No Objection

(Lisa Dusseault) No Objection

(Pasi Eronen) No Objection

(Cullen Jennings) No Objection

(Jon Peterson) No Objection

(Tim Polk) No Objection

(Dan Romascanu) No Objection

(David Ward) No Objection

(Magnus Westerlund) No Objection