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Framework for Metric Composition
RFC 5835

Yes

Lars Eggert
(Dan Romascanu)

No Objection

(Jari Arkko)
(Lisa Dusseault)
(Ralph Droms)
(Robert Sparks)
(Ron Bonica)
(Russ Housley)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 09 and is now closed.

Lars Eggert Yes

(Dan Romascanu; former steering group member) Yes

Yes ()

                            

(Adrian Farrel; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (2010-01-07)
Thank you for a readble document.

I spotted a few nits along the way. If you are working on the document,
you might fix then to save the RFC Editor some effort.


Abstract
s/This new framework memo/This framework/

In five years the framewrok will not be new!

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1.1.2

   Network managers and
   maintenance forces prefer to see results presented very rapidly, to
   detect problems quickly or see if their action has corrected a
   problem.

I stumbled reading "forces" verb or noun.
Suggest

   Network managers and
   maintainers prefer to see results presented very rapidly, to
   detect problems quickly or see if their action has corrected a
   problem.

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1.1.3

s/it may not to be reasonable/it may not be reasonable/

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2.

s/[RFC2330]as/[RFC2330] as/

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5.1

s/are encumbered/is encumbered/

(Jari Arkko; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Lisa Dusseault; former steering group member) (was No Record, No Objection) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Ralph Droms; former steering group member) (was Discuss) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Robert Sparks; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Ron Bonica; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Russ Housley; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()