An Extensible Markup Language (XML) Configuration Access Protocol (XCAP) Diff Event Package
Note: This ballot was opened for revision 08 and is now closed.
(Cullen Jennings) Yes
(Robert Sparks) Yes
(Jari Arkko) No Objection
(Ron Bonica) No Objection
(Ross Callon) No Objection
(Lisa Dusseault) (was Discuss, No Objection) No Objection
I have a bunch of editorial concerns with this document: requirements sentences with vague antecedents and other language issues that may even affect implementations and interoperability. What I can do if the authors are willing is sit down and find out what the intent was, and help fix those sentences.
(Russ Housley) No Objection
Alexey Melnikov (was Discuss) No Objection
I found the document to be difficult to read.
(Chris Newman) No Objection
Comment (2008-10-23 for -)
In addition to the ABNF problem Pasi noticed, the ABNF in this document depends on ABNF in RFC 3261, but that's not mentioned. One way to fix this is to add "import rules" like: EQUALS = <as defined in RFC 3261> token = <as defined in RFC 3261> Alternatively, just say you're importing some rules from RFC 3261.