An Extensible Markup Language (XML) Configuration Access Protocol (XCAP) Diff Event Package
RFC 5875

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 08 and is now closed.

(Cullen Jennings) Yes

(Robert Sparks) Yes

(Jari Arkko) No Objection

(Ron Bonica) No Objection

(Ross Callon) No Objection

(Lisa Dusseault) (was Discuss, No Objection) No Objection

Comment (2008-10-22)
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I have a bunch of editorial concerns with this document: requirements sentences with vague antecedents and other language issues that may even affect implementations and interoperability.  What I can do if the authors are willing is sit down and find out what the intent was, and help fix those sentences.

(Russ Housley) No Objection

Alexey Melnikov (was Discuss) No Objection

Comment (2009-08-15)
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I found the document to be difficult to read.

(Chris Newman) No Objection

Comment (2008-10-23 for -)
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In addition to the ABNF problem Pasi noticed, the ABNF in this document
depends on ABNF in RFC 3261, but that's not mentioned.  One way to fix
this is to add "import rules" like:

   EQUALS = <as defined in RFC 3261>
   token  = <as defined in RFC 3261>

Alternatively, just say you're importing some rules from RFC 3261.

(Tim Polk) No Objection

(Mark Townsley) No Objection

(David Ward) No Objection

Magnus Westerlund No Objection

(Pasi Eronen) (was Discuss) No Record