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Mobile Ad Hoc Network (MANET) Neighborhood Discovery Protocol (NHDP)
RFC 6130

Yes

(Stewart Bryant)

No Objection

(Adrian Farrel)
(Dan Romascanu)
(Gonzalo Camarillo)
(Peter Saint-Andre)
(Robert Sparks)
(Ron Bonica)
(Sean Turner)
(Tim Polk)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 15 and is now closed.

(Stewart Bryant; former steering group member) Yes

Yes ()

                            

(Adrian Farrel; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Dan Romascanu; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Gonzalo Camarillo; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Peter Saint-Andre; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Ralph Droms; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (2010-08-11)
In general, I think this document is well-written and clear.  However, I do have a few specific comments.

In section 2, I don't understand the definition of "interface".  Why not use the definition from RFC 2460?

Section 4.1: what is "an address represented by a network address"?  I don't understand the uniqueness properties defined in the first bullet.

Section 4.2: would it be more correct to write that the Information Bases "describe the state of the protocol in a node"?  Do I understand correctly that the first paragraph of 4.2 states that the Information Bases are abstractions and need not be explicitly implemented as described in the doc?  It might be helpful to give a forward reference to Tuples as they are defined later in the document.  Similarly, in section 4.2.1, it might be helpful to give forward references to the definitions of Local Interface Tuples, Removed Interface Address Tuples and 2-hop Tuples.

In section 10.1, I don't understand "A HELLO message which is transmitted periodically SHOULD contain, and otherwise MAY contain [...]"; does it mean that a HELLO message that is not transmitted periodically "MAY contain"?

Section 18: s/repository/registry/ ?

(Robert Sparks; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Ron Bonica; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Sean Turner; former steering group member) (was Discuss) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Tim Polk; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()