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Summary: Needs a YES. Needs 6 more YES or NO OBJECTION positions to pass.
I read the document. I got a bit lost in the details.
The document appears to be well-written.
in section 2,
This document assumes that the reader is familiar with the terms
SENDER MAXIMUM SEGMENT SIZE (SMSS), CONGESTION WINDOW (cwnd), and
FLIGHT SIZE (FlightSize) defined in [RFC5681]. FLIGHT SIZE is
defined as in [RFC5681] as follows:
If you assume the reader is familiar with the FLIGHT SIZE definition, why
repeat it here? If you repeat the defintion of flight size here, why not SMSS
and CWND as well?
It would have been good to have a tsvdir review of this document.
Please consider the comments raised in the Gen-ART Review by
Ben Campbell on 21-Nov-2011. The review can be found here: