NFS Version 4.0 Trunking Update
RFC 8587

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 03 and is now closed.

Alvaro Retana No Objection

Benjamin Kaduk (was Discuss) No Objection

Comment (2019-02-01 for -04)
No email
send info
Thank you for addressing my DISCUSS points!

Warren Kumari No Objection

Comment (2019-01-08 for -03)
Thank you for this document, and special thanks to Shwetha Bhandari for the OpsDir review.

(Spencer Dawkins; former steering group member) Yes

Yes ( for -03)
No email
send info

(Adam Roach; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ( for -03)
No email
send info

(Alexey Melnikov; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ( for -03)
No email
send info

(Ben Campbell; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (2019-01-09 for -03)
General: I don't expect a change in approach this late in the process, but I think the approach of this update (replacing, inserting, and updating sections in the updated RFC) is pretty unfriendly to the readers. This would make sense if we actually rendered patched versions of updated RFCs, but we do not. This leaves readers to flip back and forth to figure out the context of each update. 

§1: s/"which enables"/"that enables"

§5.1 Does "updated introduction" to section 8.4 mean the same as "replaces section 8.4, but not it's subsections?"

§5.2.2 (and other sections that add a new subsection to 8.4). Are these assumed to be inserted in a particular location under 8.4? That is, can you state the new section numbers? Otherwise the reader is left to guess where these would be inserted.

§6: What is meant by "outside section 8"?

(Deborah Brungard; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ( for -03)
No email
send info

(Mirja Kühlewind; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ( for -03)
No email
send info

(Suresh Krishnan; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ( for -03)

(Terry Manderson; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ( for -03)
No email
send info