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NFS Version 4.0 Trunking Update
RFC 8587

Yes

(Spencer Dawkins)

No Objection

Alvaro Retana
(Adam Roach)
(Alexey Melnikov)
(Deborah Brungard)
(Mirja Kühlewind)
(Suresh Krishnan)
(Terry Manderson)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 03 and is now closed.

Alvaro Retana No Objection

Warren Kumari No Objection

Comment (2019-01-08 for -03)
Thank you for this document, and special thanks to Shwetha Bhandari for the OpsDir review.

(Spencer Dawkins; former steering group member) Yes

Yes (for -03)

                            

(Adam Roach; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (for -03)

                            

(Alexey Melnikov; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (for -03)

                            

(Ben Campbell; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (2019-01-09 for -03)
General: I don't expect a change in approach this late in the process, but I think the approach of this update (replacing, inserting, and updating sections in the updated RFC) is pretty unfriendly to the readers. This would make sense if we actually rendered patched versions of updated RFCs, but we do not. This leaves readers to flip back and forth to figure out the context of each update. 

§1: s/"which enables"/"that enables"

§5.1 Does "updated introduction" to section 8.4 mean the same as "replaces section 8.4, but not it's subsections?"

§5.2.2 (and other sections that add a new subsection to 8.4). Are these assumed to be inserted in a particular location under 8.4? That is, can you state the new section numbers? Otherwise the reader is left to guess where these would be inserted.

§6: What is meant by "outside section 8"?

(Benjamin Kaduk; former steering group member) (was Discuss) No Objection

No Objection (2019-02-01 for -04)
Thank you for addressing my DISCUSS points!

(Deborah Brungard; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (for -03)

                            

(Mirja Kühlewind; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (for -03)

                            

(Suresh Krishnan; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (for -03)

                            

(Terry Manderson; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (for -03)