Advice to the Trustees of the IETF Trust on Rights to Be Granted in IETF Documents
RFC 8721

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 02 and is now closed.

Alvaro Retana Yes

Benjamin Kaduk Yes

Martin Vigoureux No Objection

Roman Danyliw No Objection

(Alexey Melnikov; former steering group member) Yes

Yes ()
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(Alissa Cooper; former steering group member) Yes

Yes ( for -02)
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(Barry Leiba; former steering group member) Yes

Yes (2019-08-21 for -02)
Two nits in the Abstract (and, yes, I know the first one was there in the original):

   The Trustees of the IETF Trust accepts direction from the IETF
   regarding the rights to be granted.

As “The Trustees” is plural, the verb needs to be so as well: “accept”.

There’s a missing space before the last sentence.

(Adam Roach; former steering group member) No Objection

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(Deborah Brungard; former steering group member) No Objection

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(Mirja Kühlewind; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (2019-08-28)
nit in sec 4.5: "the IETF intends to grant in the content of RFCS." -> RFCs with lower s

(Suresh Krishnan; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (2019-09-04)
* Section 3

Since the [TRUST-LEGAL] reference already contains the URL, is the URL necessary inline in this section?