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Advice to the Trustees of the IETF Trust on Rights to Be Granted in IETF Documents
RFC 8721

Yes

Alvaro Retana
(Alexey Melnikov)
(Alissa Cooper)
(Benjamin Kaduk)

No Objection

Roman Danyliw
(Adam Roach)
(Deborah Brungard)
(Martin Vigoureux)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 02 and is now closed.

Alvaro Retana Yes

Roman Danyliw No Objection

(Alexey Melnikov; former steering group member) Yes

Yes ()

                            

(Alissa Cooper; former steering group member) Yes

Yes (for -02)

                            

(Barry Leiba; former steering group member) Yes

Yes (2019-08-21 for -02)
Two nits in the Abstract (and, yes, I know the first one was there in the original):

   The Trustees of the IETF Trust accepts direction from the IETF
   regarding the rights to be granted.

As “The Trustees” is plural, the verb needs to be so as well: “accept”.

There’s a missing space before the last sentence.

(Benjamin Kaduk; former steering group member) Yes

Yes ()

                            

(Adam Roach; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Deborah Brungard; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Martin Vigoureux; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection ()

                            

(Mirja Kühlewind; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (2019-08-28)
nit in sec 4.5: "the IETF intends to grant in the content of RFCS." -> RFCs with lower s

(Suresh Krishnan; former steering group member) No Objection

No Objection (2019-09-04)
* Section 3

Since the [TRUST-LEGAL] reference already contains the URL, is the URL necessary inline in this section?