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Advice to the Trustees of the IETF Trust on Rights to Be Granted in IETF Documents
RFC 8721

Yes

Alvaro Retana
(Alexey Melnikov)
(Alissa Cooper)
(Benjamin Kaduk)

No Objection

Roman Danyliw
(Adam Roach)
(Deborah Brungard)
(Martin Vigoureux)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 02 and is now closed.

Alvaro Retana
Yes
Roman Danyliw
No Objection
Alexey Melnikov Former IESG member
Yes
Yes ()

                            
Alissa Cooper Former IESG member
Yes
Yes (for -02)

                            
Barry Leiba Former IESG member
Yes
Yes (2019-08-21 for -02)
Two nits in the Abstract (and, yes, I know the first one was there in the original):

   The Trustees of the IETF Trust accepts direction from the IETF
   regarding the rights to be granted.

As “The Trustees” is plural, the verb needs to be so as well: “accept”.

There’s a missing space before the last sentence.
Benjamin Kaduk Former IESG member
Yes
Yes ()

                            
Adam Roach Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection ()

                            
Deborah Brungard Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection ()

                            
Martin Vigoureux Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection ()

                            
Mirja Kühlewind Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (2019-08-28)
nit in sec 4.5: "the IETF intends to grant in the content of RFCS." -> RFCs with lower s
Suresh Krishnan Former IESG member
No Objection
No Objection (2019-09-04)
* Section 3

Since the [TRUST-LEGAL] reference already contains the URL, is the URL necessary inline in this section?