Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon-04
review-ietf-ancp-pon-04-genart-lc-even-2012-04-09-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-04-10
Requested 2012-04-09
Authors Dr. Nabil N. Bitar , Sanjay Wadhwa , Thomas Haag , Li Hongyu
I-D last updated 2015-10-14 (Latest revision 2013-02-24)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -?? by Roni Even
Genart IETF Last Call review of -04 by Roni Even (diff)
Tsvdir Early review of -?? by Allison Mankin
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-ancp-pon by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 05)
Result Ready
Completed 2012-04-09
review-ietf-ancp-pon-04-genart-lc-even-2012-04-09-00
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Document:

draft-ietf-ancp-pon-04

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2013–2–12

IETF LC End Date: 2013-2–19

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Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC

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Nits/editorial comments:

OMCI is expanded very late in the document and not on the first usage.