Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting-07
review-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting-07-intdir-telechat-pignataro-2023-12-09-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2023-12-09
Requested 2023-12-01
Requested by Éric Vyncke
Authors Roy Arends , Matt Larson
I-D last updated 2023-12-09
Completed reviews Dnsdir Telechat review of -07 by James Gannon (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -07 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -07 by Gorry Fairhurst (diff)
Dnsdir Early review of -04 by James Gannon (diff)
Secdir Early review of -04 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -06 by Gorry Fairhurst (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -06 by David C Lawrence (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Comments 
There is already a review request for the DNS directorate, i.e., a normal INT review is to be preferred by a non-DNS reviewer. Thanks 
-éric
Assignment Reviewer Carlos Pignataro
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting by Internet Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/iWfBPsmDEXyS3duvcdSH2VQlTZ0
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-12-09
review-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting-07-intdir-telechat-pignataro-2023-12-09-00
draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting

Hi!

I was assigned a review of draft-ietf-dnsop-caching-resolution-failures, for an
INTDIR Telechat Review.

Review of       draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting
Type    Telechat Review
Team    Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline        2023-12-09
Reviewer        Carlos Pignataro

In general, I found the document to be useful and clear, effectively organzied,
and easy to follow for an implementor.

Please find below only some minor nits for consideration:

1. Append a comma after "i.e.".

2. Change "Well known" to "Well-known".

3. Capitalization of "RRset" vs. "RRSet", although RFC 8499 mentions both.

4. Should RFC 2199 be a Normative reference instead of Informative?

Thanks!

Carlos.