Early Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs-00
review-ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs-00-rtgdir-early-sinicrope-2016-06-27-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2016-06-27
Requested 2016-05-05
Authors Daniel Migault , Joel M. Halpern , Susan Hares
I-D last updated 2016-06-27
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -00 by Dave Sinicrope (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dave Sinicrope
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs by Routing Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 00 (document currently at 06)
Result Has nits
Completed 2016-06-27
review-ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs-00-rtgdir-early-sinicrope-2016-06-27-00

Hello,



I am the Routing Area Directorate member that was assigned the QA review of
draft-

ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs-01

.



If you’re not familiar with the QA review process please see:

https://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDirDocQa



BR

Dave

General Comments:

- overall the document is organized well and has a good flow leading from
overall issues to specific issues and justified requirements.

- the document presumes familiarity with the I2RS architecture and states this
plainly cuing  the reader to look there first.  That said
 the document can be read standalone with a conceptual knowledge of the I2RS
 architecture.

See the attached document for marked up and inline comments.

Nits

- singular / plural usage needs to be consistent

- verb plural and tense match need attention

Note: I got through page 14.  Many comments earlier in the doc apply to the few
remaining sections.

Please let me know if you have any questions.

Dave

Attachment:

draft-ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs-01.docx

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 draft-ietf-i2rs-security-environment-reqs-01.docx