Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-protocol-rfc5101bis-08
review-ietf-ipfix-protocol-rfc5101bis-08-genart-lc-moriarty-2013-06-14-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ipfix-protocol-rfc5101bis |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-06-28 | |
| Requested | 2013-06-14 | |
| Authors | Paul Aitken, Benoît Claise , Brian Trammell | |
| I-D last updated | 2013-06-14 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -08
by Kathleen Moriarty
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Brian Weis (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Brian Weis (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Kathleen Moriarty |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-ipfix-protocol-rfc5101bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 10) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2013-06-14 |
review-ietf-ipfix-protocol-rfc5101bis-08-genart-lc-moriarty-2013-06-14-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-ipfix-protocol-rfc5101bis-08 Reviewer: Kathleen Moriarty Review Date: June 15, 2013 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: The draft is well written and ready for publication. There is at least one idnit that should be corrected, but should be fine for the Auth48 process. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: From idnits, the first 2 should be fine: (See RFCs 3967 and 4897 for information about using normative references to lower-maturity documents in RFCs) -- Possible downref: Normative reference to a draft: ref. 'RFC5102bis' -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'IPFIX-IANA' == Outdated reference: A later version (-04) exists of draft-ietf-ipfix-mediation-protocol-03 Sorry this took a while, my travel schedule has been hectic.