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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-07
review-ietf-jmap-sharing-07-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2024-04-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-jmap-sharing
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2024-04-01
Requested 2024-03-18
Authors Neil Jenkins
I-D last updated 2024-04-10
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Susan Hares (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-jmap-sharing by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/ztiXs5KE_YF6AwNVtVcSBz306cE
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 09)
Result Has issues
Completed 2024-04-10
review-ietf-jmap-sharing-07-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2024-04-10-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Ops area directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Ops area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last-call comments.

Summary: This document specifies a data model for sharing data between users
using JMAP (JSON Meta Application Protocol), aiming to establish a consistent
model for sharing across various data types.

Major Issue: I think it is necessary to have a section on Error Handling to
outline common error scenarios, categorization of error types, and recommended
actions for error resolution.

Thank you very much,

Linda Dunbar