Last Call Review of draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-07
review-ietf-jmap-sharing-07-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2024-04-10-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-jmap-sharing |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2024-04-01 | |
Requested | 2024-03-18 | |
Authors | Neil Jenkins | |
I-D last updated | 2024-04-10 | |
Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -07
by Yaron Sheffer
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Susan Hares (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Linda Dunbar (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Linda Dunbar |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-jmap-sharing by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/ztiXs5KE_YF6AwNVtVcSBz306cE | |
Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 09) | |
Result | Has issues | |
Completed | 2024-04-10 |
review-ietf-jmap-sharing-07-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2024-04-10-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Ops area directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Ops area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last-call comments. Summary: This document specifies a data model for sharing data between users using JMAP (JSON Meta Application Protocol), aiming to establish a consistent model for sharing across various data types. Major Issue: I think it is necessary to have a section on Error Handling to outline common error scenarios, categorization of error types, and recommended actions for error resolution. Thank you very much, Linda Dunbar