Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-lspping-norao-07
review-ietf-mpls-lspping-norao-07-opsdir-lc-clarke-2024-02-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-lspping-norao
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2024-02-15
Requested 2024-02-01
Authors Kireeti Kompella , Ron Bonica , Greg Mirsky
I-D last updated 2024-02-15
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by Dhruv Dhody (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Loganaden Velvindron (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Joe Clarke (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -02 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -07 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joe Clarke
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-lspping-norao by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/M_tYVmtd9b4zC1gtCNDjlFZSMKM
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready
Completed 2024-02-15
review-ietf-mpls-lspping-norao-07-opsdir-lc-clarke-2024-02-15-00
I have been selected to review this draft on behalf of OPS DIR.  This draft is
a standard track document updating RFC8029 on the usage of RAO in LSP Ping.  I
found the draft easy to read, and I appreciate the specific attention to
backwards compatibility and the explicit detail on what "deprecation" means in
this case.  Operators get additional clarity and understanding with the
updates, especially with respect to destination address selection.

I feel this document is ready for publication.  On the nits side, you have a
double use of "for" in the Acknowledgments section.