Last Call Review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization-07
review-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization-07-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-02-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-02-04
Requested 2014-01-23
Authors Hitoshi Asaeda , Qin Wu , Rachel Huang
I-D last updated 2015-10-14 (Latest revision 2014-02-26)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Leif Johansson (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
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Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization-07

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2014-02-04

IETF LC End Date:  2014-02-04

IESG Telechat date: NA





Summary:

This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
minor comments.



Major issues:

N/A

Minor issues:

N/A



Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 4], Section 1.4,

"used by network manager"---->"used by the network manager"





-[Page 8], Section 4.2,

"In this document, the value I=00 is the reserved value and MUST NOT be used."

It would be good to add if it should be ignored by receiver if used, or discard
the whole Synchronization Offset Report ...



-General: would be good to add caption to Figures p.5 and p.7



Best Regards,

Meral

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Meral Shirazipour

Ericsson Research

www.ericsson.com