Ballot for charter-ietf-netconf
Note: This ballot was opened for revision 18-07 and is now closed.
Ballot question: "Is this charter ready for external review?"
Can you please reflow this sensibly so that each paragraph is not one giant line? Editorial comments: "Working Groiup" -> "Working Group" 4. "the YANG 1.1 constructs" -> "YANG 1.1 constructs" 5. Remove "e.g." as it is redundant with "including" "Following specifications" -> "The following specifications" remove "i.e." These milestones seem crazy aggressive unless the documents are basically already done.
Does "which can be used to hold onto asymmetric private keys and certificates" mean "which can be used to hold asymmetric private keys and certificates"?