Transport and Services Working Group
charter-ietf-tsvwg-07

Yes

Francesca Palombini
Paul Wouters
Zaheduzzaman Sarker
(Andrew Alston)
(Martin Duke)

No Objection

Erik Kline
Jim Guichard
John Scudder
Murray Kucherawy
Roman Danyliw
Éric Vyncke
(Lars Eggert)
(Robert Wilton)

Note: This ballot was opened for revision 06-01 and is now closed.

Ballot question: "Do we approve of this charter?"

Francesca Palombini
Yes
Paul Wouters
Yes
Zaheduzzaman Sarker
Yes
Erik Kline
No Objection
Jim Guichard
No Objection
John Scudder
No Objection
Murray Kucherawy
No Objection
Roman Danyliw
No Objection
Éric Vyncke
No Objection
Andrew Alston Former IESG member
Yes
Yes (for -06-01) Not sent 

                            

                        
                    

                
            
                
                    

                        

                            Martin Duke Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            Yes
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

                                Yes 
                                
                                    (2023-12-12 for -06-01)
                                
                                
                                    
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Once again, the intent of this recharter is to remove references to the "Transport Area" without changing the technical scope of the WG. The charter also contains some current areas of focus, which I have updated.

                            

                        
                    

                
            
        
            
                
            
                
            
                
            
                
            
                
            
                
            
                
                    

                        

                            Lars Eggert Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

                                No Objection 
                                
                                    (2023-12-14 for -06-01)
                                
                                
                                    
                                         Sent
                                    
                                
                            

                        

                        
                            

                                
# GEN AD review of charter-ietf-tsvwg-06-01

CC @larseggert

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

### Typos

#### Paragraph 0
```
- and  publication of RFCs dealing with transport layer topics that are not in
-                                                ^
+ and  publication of RFCs dealing with transport-layer topics that are not in
+                                                ^
```

#### "A", paragraph 15
```
- Dec 2023 - Submit " DCCP Extensions for Multipath Operation with Multiple Addresses" as an
-                                                                                          -
```

## Notes

This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the
[`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into
individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT].

[ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md
[ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments
[IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool

                            

                        
                    

                
            
                
                    

                        

                            Robert Wilton Former IESG member
                        

                        

                            
                            No Objection
                            
                        

                    

                    

                        

                            

                                No Objection 
                                
                                    (for -06-01)
                                
                                
                                    
                                         Not sent