Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidr-publication-09
review-ietf-sidr-publication-09-genart-lc-yee-2017-01-06-00

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Document: draft-ietf-sidr-publication-09
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2017-01-06
IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-06
IESG Telechat date: 2017-01-19

Summary: This specification defines a protocol for handling objects in an RPKI
repository.   The document seems fairly straightforward and simple to
understand.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

Page 5, Section 2.2, last paragraph, last sentence: perhaps change "are
permitted to" to "MAY"?

Page 7, Section 2.6, 1st paragraph: change "RelaxNG" to "RELAX NG". (Hey, I had
to look it up.)

Page 14, Section 4, 1st paragraph after rsync enumation: "safely" is used but
no subsequent mention is made of what is unsafe about the non-overlapping rsync
directories.  Is the reader expected to know something about rsync's safety? 
Nothing in the Security Considerations deals with this topic.

Page 16, Section 6, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: insert "private" before
"keys".  Insert "to" before "delete".

Page 17, Section 7: it might be good to include references to: XML, RelaxNG,
and maybe rsync (yeah, I know that one is a little tough).