Telechat Review of draft-ietf-sidr-publication-10
review-ietf-sidr-publication-10-genart-telechat-yee-2017-01-17-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-sidr-publication |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2017-01-17 | |
Requested | 2016-12-16 | |
Authors | Samuel Weiler , Anuja Sonalker , Rob Austein | |
I-D last updated | 2017-01-17 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -09
by Peter E. Yee
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Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Paul Wouters (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Ron Bonica (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -10 by Paul Wouters (diff) Genart Telechat review of -10 by Peter E. Yee (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Peter E. Yee |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-sidr-publication by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 10 (document currently at 12) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2017-01-17 |
review-ietf-sidr-publication-10-genart-telechat-yee-2017-01-17-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-sidr-publication-10 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 2017-01-17 IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-06 IESG Telechat date: 2017-01-19 Summary: This specification defines a protocol for handling objects in an RPKI repository. Version 10 gives additional explanatory text that is helpful and fixes the nits I previously submitted. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Page 3, Section 1, 2nd paragraph before end of page, 2nd sentence: change "RCC" to "RFC". Page 6, Section 2.2, 3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence: delete "is" before "MUST". Page 7, 5th full paragraph: change "messages" to "message".