Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04
review-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04-genart-lc-halpern-2022-09-21-01

Request Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-10-04
Requested 2022-09-20
Authors Don Fedyk , Eric Kinzie
I-D last updated 2023-01-31 (Latest revision 2022-10-21)
Completed reviews Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -04 by Brian Trammell (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -04 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Ivaylo Petrov (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -05 by Ralf Weber (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel M. Halpern
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/5gau5fsdf6JutMgWnPRn9R_HVto
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 11)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2022-09-21
review-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04-genart-lc-halpern-2022-09-21-01
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Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-04
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2022-09-21
IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-04
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Assuming a reasonable answer to one question, this document is ready
for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC.

Major issues:
    The one question I have is "why?"  I could not find anywhere in the
    document any explanation of why we are defining an SNMP MIB for monitoring
    ipsecme, nor the equivalent why an operator would choose to use this MIB
    instead of the YANG based model that it is based upon.

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments: N/A