Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo-11
review-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo-11-genart-lc-kyzivat-2023-05-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-05-16
Requested 2023-05-02
Authors William Britto , Shraddha Hegde , Parag Kaneriya , Rajesh Shetty , Ron Bonica , Peter Psenak
I-D last updated 2023-11-22 (Latest revision 2023-07-24)
Completed reviews Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -11 by Qin Wu (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -11 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -11 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -12 by Antoine Fressancourt (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -17 by Qin Wu
Rtgdir Early review of -06 by Matthew Bocci (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Paul Kyzivat
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Y9ddGxVGcRxxTVsAgQ034X-AnpY
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 17)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-05-11
review-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo-11-genart-lc-kyzivat-2023-05-11-00
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Document: draft-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo-11
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2023-05-16
IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-16
IESG Telechat date: ?

Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should 
be fixed before publication.

NITS: 2

1) NIT: typo

In section 5: s/datapalne/data-plane/

2) NIT: reported by IDNits

In section 6.1:

  == Missing Reference: 'RFC5120' is mentioned on line 301, but not defined