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Document: draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-channel-06.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <Miguel.A.Garcia at ericsson.com>
Review Date: 2012-06-19
IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-20
IESG Telechat date: 2012-06-21

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:



The document is well written and easy to read. Congratulations to the 


authors.




I have some minor editorial comments.



- All the figures that represent bits on the wire do not follow the 


convention of numbering the bits. I would suggest to add the bit number 


as per the RFC style guide. This means adding these two lines to most 


figures in the document:





       0                   1                   2                   3
       0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1




- Also, related to figures. I would suggest to add a caption to each 


figure, for example, under the figure in Section 2.1:




      Figure 2: RBridge Channel Message inner frame



This allows other documents to easily refer to the figure by number 


(e.g., "Figure 2 in RFC xxxx").






- Section 2.1.1: s/species/specifies



- Section 4. There are 5 bullet points. Something is wrong with the 


indentation of the third bullet point.







/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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